Peer Reviews

GlisteringGlow (United States) reviewed:

one of one

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This poem is very beautiful. The last line focuses not only on the idea of how you view yourself but also on the overall passage of time. It's like a flash; taking the reader from a fantasy or deep thought...

about 4 hours ago

only_a_mirage (bird) (United States) reviewed:

a little boy with nothing wrong

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Again, this is just beautiful and so heart-wrenching, I absolutely love it.

about 4 hours ago

Chai Tea (Australia) reviewed:

To Love Forbidden Things

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Hi Yolanda! I have very much enjoyed reading your work, and I think you have great potential as a writer. My comments are only my opinions, so feel free to ignore them when you feel it necessary. I hope I've...

about 4 hours ago

Yolanda (Australia) reviewed:

love different| a prayer written on the back of a hymnal; a desecration made of broken glass and hallelujahs

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Ok so I reviewed an earlier version of this and nearly had a heart attack when I realised that it wasn't there anymore. But alas it it. These new additions only increase the beauty that this piece already held. It...

about 4 hours ago

kylowolf7 (Canada) reviewed:

Paper Stories

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None

about 4 hours ago

NS Kumar (India) reviewed:

13

PROMPT: [Insert Age]

This was a very relatable piece. Becoming a teenager is hard indeed, and you portray that beautifully in your piece. I'm in no position to give you advice: I'm 16 and still in the same place as you are in...

about 4 hours ago

NS Kumar (India) reviewed:

The Voyage to Home

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This is such a wonderful piece! Do publish more pieces like this in the future. Also, welcome to the WtW community. I am looking forward to reading what you come up with next :)

about 4 hours ago

Yolanda (Australia) reviewed:

love different| a prayer written on the back of a hymnal; a desecration made of broken glass and hallelujahs

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Even your message to the readers is poetic and beautiful. Is it possible to fall in love with someone because of their writing? Maybe, because isn't writing so often what we are really thinking? And surely you can love someone...

about 4 hours ago

Yolanda (Australia) reviewed:

if the world were made of words

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Stunning poem

about 4 hours ago

Yolanda (Australia) reviewed:

i am hollow all the way through; watch me float away

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Just so, so good.

about 4 hours ago

Yolanda (Australia) reviewed:

[title redacted]

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I love this a lot. It really made me feel. This style of writing is beautiful and your voice really carries through the piece.

about 4 hours ago

Yolanda (Australia) reviewed:

waltz

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Really good. The tempo is nice and I love the imagery that your language conjures- a lonely soul and a lonely ocean.

about 4 hours ago

Yolanda (Australia) reviewed:

Of Loss and Lament (please review; potential comp entry)

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So, so good. You should definitely submit it to the competition!

about 4 hours ago

Yolanda (Australia) reviewed:

a little boy with nothing wrong

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The whole piece is stunning and I really enjoyed reading it.

about 4 hours ago

narwhal stories (United States) reviewed:

13

PROMPT: [Insert Age]

you did great

about 5 hours ago

rosie_ (Australia) reviewed:

THE GRAND BUDAPEST HOTEL: Wes Anderson’s Flawless Portrait of a Long-Forgotten Era

PROMPT: Film/TV Series Review Competition 2021

I thoroughly enjoyed reading and reviewing this piece. All these comments are just my opinion, so don't feel pressure to integrate where you don't feel necessary. Amazing work, and good luck with the competition!

about 5 hours ago

HighEntropy (India) reviewed:

Banana Fish: A Realness Unspoken

PROMPT: Film/TV Series Review Competition 2021

this was absolutely stunning! you do you <3

about 5 hours ago

saskia_hughes (Australia) reviewed:

Cardigan, Betty

PROMPT: September Grab Bag

Overall, you are an amazing writer and I love your story. And whether you choose to follow my advice or not, your imagination and ability to portray imagery is really quite unique. I encourage you to continue writing amazing stories...

about 22 hours ago

Yolanda (Australia) reviewed:

Innocence

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I really like it! I think I have a somewhat similar writing style and so I love your use of language and the pace of the piece.

about 22 hours ago

Carmen Katzenberger (United States) reviewed:

the truth will set you free

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I love this poem, and you have an amazing knack for writing.

about 22 hours ago

violetvelvet (Singapore) reviewed:

TIME: An Emotional Series Review

PROMPT: Film/TV Series Review Competition 2021

try to avoid run on sentences because they can get you confused about the main gist of your sentence. you can read out your essay to yourself because it helps you to make sense of your own writing! (this helps...

about 22 hours ago

ElvishWriter (United States) reviewed:

My Mustang: Wild and Untamed

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Keep it up! You're doing amazing and I hope to see more and more from you!

4 days ago

Carmen Katzenberger (United States) reviewed:

Writers' Block

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I really loved this and I can tell you that you can sew!

4 days ago

Chai Tea (Australia) reviewed:

Star Wars, a Thorough Review

PROMPT: Film/TV Series Review Competition 2021

Hi sophiabrown0671! This was a really strong entry; you should be proud. My comments are just my opinions, so feel free to ignore them when you feel it necessary. I hope I've been helpful.
Have a wonderful day!

4 days ago

Carmen Katzenberger (United States) reviewed:

Wednesday Class

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I really loved this piece and it kind of gave me a little pick me up reading it and made me smile.

4 days ago