Peer Reviews

YayaZ (United States of America) reviewed:

The Places we Stop At

PROMPT: “Landmarks and Geography”

You make some keen observations about life in this piece. However, I found it hard to understand the full message of this piece because there was no punctuation. To help you figure out where key moment of pause should be,...

about 13 hours ago

mc593 (United States of America) reviewed:

Weird and Important Opinions That I Stand By, But May Not Matter

PROMPT: Your View

i really liked their title.

1 day ago

aa5781 (United States of America) reviewed:

A Random Ten

PROMPT: Your View

For opinion seven, I believe "college" and "too" are spelled just a letter off. Besides that the grammar seems good.

1 day ago

dyn4m1cacid911 (United States of America) reviewed:

The Joy of Music

FREE WRITING

I love your writing sm :"))))

1 day ago

Ash1721 (United States of America) reviewed:

épea

FREE WRITING

I'm not really sure what is happening in this piece but it has a mystic feel so that might be intentional

1 day ago

Alex Gray (United States of America) reviewed:

The Station

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2019

1 day ago

Rayna Jay (United States of America) reviewed:

My Ten Opinions

PROMPT: Your View

I really like how most of your opinions are an overall view of human beings and how to treat them.

1 day ago

Idk... (United States of America) reviewed:

The Mystery Of The Gum

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2019

It is great but indent your story.

1 day ago

Leah Alfalah (United States of America) reviewed:

Art Class-Incomplete

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2019

Sounds amazing so far! Keep up the good work.

1 day ago

Jilly17bean (United States of America) reviewed:

A Shining Sky: Prologue/Teaser

FREE WRITING

There was some edits, I highlited them, click on them to see what they are.

1 day ago

themidnightone (Australia) reviewed:

some days I wish

FREE WRITING

Love this poem, it's very lyrical.

1 day ago

PalmLeaf (Thailand) reviewed:

The Floor

FREE WRITING

I really admire the creative idea behind this piece! It's not very often I read a 'stream-of-consciousness' post on Write The World, but yours was so intriguing I had to click on it. I would love to see it expanded...

2 days ago

SoulStone (United States of America) reviewed:

They Want More Than I Can Give

FREE WRITING

I think the lines "I despise you", and "I still love you" are interesting because they contradict each other but, in a way, they still make sense. This is a really cool perspective and I like all of the added...

2 days ago

SoulStone (United States of America) reviewed:

The Soiree

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2019

Really nice job!

2 days ago

Quinn Nelson (United States of America) reviewed:

One

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2019

One more thing, what's One's motivations? I know this may be for down the line, but I find a character so much more interesting if they want something. Maybe have One look out the window and long for being out...

2 days ago

Bookworm101 (Australia) reviewed:

The Girls Fight (PLEASE REVIEW)!!!!

FREE WRITING

2 days ago

Donnie Montano (United States of America) reviewed:

My Recipe

FREE WRITING

Again, the humor is really nice because it adds personality and character to this "Recipe". Also it makes you think about yourself and how much you relate to the piece, it's nice to laugh at yourself every now and again....

2 days ago

Julia Warnock (United States of America) reviewed:

Barriers By Frank Iero and the Future Violents

PROMPT: Album Review Competition 2019

Hopefully some of my comments are helpful for you. There's just a few grammar mistakes and run-on sentences in this piece, but I highlighted most of them, and they should be easy to fix. I enjoyed reading your piece, and...

2 days ago

Brooke A. (United States of America) reviewed:

melancholy becomes this mysterious man in whom destiny lives like a parasite

FREE WRITING

2 days ago

Noah Saucedo Montgomery (United States of America) reviewed:

The Mystery Of The Gum

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2019

I liked how it kinda takes a creepy turn in the middle of the article

2 days ago

Boogie With Stu (United States of America) reviewed:

Churning Waters Pt 4

FREE WRITING

One thing I would consider is adding a little more description though :D

2 days ago

Leah Alfalah (United States of America) reviewed:

The Curse of the Damp Sandwich

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2019

Amazing work, just maybe take into consideration of explaining more into detail!

2 days ago

Alyssa Manning (United States of America) reviewed:

Waterfalls Academy

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2019

I love it!

2 days ago

LucyK (United States of America) reviewed:

Her

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2019

2 days ago

LucyK (United States of America) reviewed:

Battle With the Boomers

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2019

<3

2 days ago