Some people may say this is cheating, but since I am not very good at rhyming, I use the rhyme dictionary on rhymezone.com. You can type any word in and it will tell you all the words in the English...

This is an amazing piece! Great work! In terms of the comment you left regarding if this memory should be a poem or creative nonfiction, I think it could be great as either! I really like this poem though and...

Small moments like this are amazing subjects for poetry! Try not to see the poems that come from them as slap-dash, because if you do you might miss the change to use your amazing poetic voice to explore more amazing...

I followed you and I can't wait to read more from you. If there is any other piece you would like a review on, please let me know. I hope you found this review helpful.

this is actually pretty polished for a rough rough draft! i’d say that with some cleaning up, like word flow and diction, this’ll shine really nicely! your concept is so cool, a doppelgänger? and no worries about the “cliche” romance,...

This is very good. Remember to keep writing!!!!

Good start! Hope you do well for the contest you are entering:)

This is a good start, and its a great idea to start infusing thoughts you are passionate about into your writing. Keep up the good work.

Great work, mournful, emotive and relatable. Such a pleasure to review!

Absolutely beautiful piece. I can't wait to read more from you!

Great work, keep going.

It was a pleasure to meet you and all the other community ambassadors at our last meeting. I look forward to reading more of your writing. This poem had such a great concept and shows that you are an incredibly...

Yeah, check out my contest! Prompts for contests #1! Great job! Good luck!

I also really liked some of your use in verbs here, and how you didn't always resort to the bland verbs like "said" or "go". Overall, this was a gripping dramatic short story that broke a part of my heart...

I wanted to just talk a lil more about how much I liked your fourth stanza. It's definitely the strongest one in your poem (in my opinion, of course), and I think it gets at the crux of the 'story'...

This is so artfully done and so true! Great job! (btw I'm on wattpad too; small world huh ;))

-aditi

thanks for sharing this with everyone! good luck with the competition

It was a super great story, you can count on me reading the other ones because; I need to know what happened with Allie! In the end, you did manage to capture my attention and convince me to read more,...

This is a great piece and I'd love to read another draft if you write one. Do let me know if you have any questions! All the best with your writing :)

Fantastic, thought-provoking idea with a bunch of really creative symbolism and imagery! It's basically everything beautiful about poetry all wrapped up in one little piece. Keep writing -- I can't wait to see where your talent takes you next! :)

This is a great piece and I wish you luck in the contest!

Great job!