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painpenpaper (Philippines) published:

Perfection and Change

PROMPT: Personal Essay Competition: Making Change

I, as a person. I also seek perfection in things I  see, like this girl in front of me. Her hair is messy, she has blood on her mouth, eyes are soar. She's a total mess that I can call a trash. She have this life where her family is broken, she's living like an outcast. An imperfect life you can call.

She wanted some changes, perfection! She wants a big circle of friends, a happy family that everyone would...

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R.j.Elsewhere (Australia) published:

I fell in love with a blackhole

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The burn in my mouth is your name;
It’s like pronouncing fireworks,
And preaching gunpowder
 
Cos your lips are a pair of pyromaniacs,
And with a stolen kiss,
They left matches between my teeth and petrol on my tongue
 
My ribcage door is hanging by its hinges;
There is nothing inside but space,
And the skeleton of a fantasy
 
Cos those eyes of yours are hungry lovers,
And with just a glance,
They swallowed everything big from...

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Stewart Worthington (Australia) published:

Making Sure

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"Be warned, I'll fall too deeply. Be prepared for a sappy romantic if you take a step closer towards me. I'll expect roses and kisses and smiles all day - I'll be a nightmare. I'll want to hold your hand in mine because I've always wondered what it would be like. I'll look into your eyes every chance I get. I'd never want to label their colour wrongly again. I'll always ask if you're okay when you're not. I'll always...

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painpenpaper (Philippines) published:

I write...

PROMPT: Why I Write

I write to give mute people a voice to be heard, to give deaf people a hope to be understand and to make blind people see how beautiful our world is, behind its cruelties.

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Porkbowl (United States) published:

Hope

PROMPT: Why I Write

I write because I choose to write. I choose to write because I show more emotion, more detail. More than just simply drawing something. In this world I find true beauty in words, books, articles. Anything other than Something I can just stare at for entertainment and fun that will last me only a minute. I write because it shows the true me and my true emotions in life. The emotions of sadness, happiness, or Mabey anger. Because in words...
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Porkbowl (United States) published:

Hope

PROMPT: Why I Write

I write because I choose to write. I choose to write because I show more emotion, more detail. More than just simply drawing something. In this world I find true beauty in words, books, articles. Anything other than Something I just stare at for entertainment and fun that will last me only a minute. I write because it shows the true me and my true emotions in life. The emotions of sadness, happiness, or Mabey anger. Because in words I...
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ThemindofC (United States) published:

Last Words

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This is a letter I wrote but never sent. To the boy who did some of the worst.
Love, C


I have been trying to find the best words to officially and completely let you go. Last summer, I had written many letters to you, but I this one is it. My last one. In order to completely let you go, I will let you know about the poems and writings I have done about you. One of them I...

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Made4Love (United States) published:

Colors #SFOW5

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     Ray and Rain call in their children from another room to be introduced to their aunt and uncle, Sun and Cloud.
     The children all come running in all at the same time, as typical. Though they do their own thing most of the time, on special occasions they all stay together.
     As they enter the room, they subconsciously line up in a specific order. This is also typical of them.

     Red is...

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ThemindofC (United States) published:

Slow Breathing

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Before the yelling and the crying,
I stood before you listening to my heart beating,
and felt my fingertips go numb.
I could feel myself letting my breaths out slow, it almost felt painful.
It was the last moments I had before you let me go,
and the first moments of tasting life on my own.
-C

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16missing (United States) published:

Broken

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broken 
pieces shatter to the floor
my heart 
breaks and breaks again 
why am i the only one feeling this way 
why am i the only one crying 
i cant breathe 
i cant swallow the knot in my throat
How can i live my life
with my insides so twisted up 

 

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Nightowl (Korea, Republic of) published:

Welcome to New Comer's Bay

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Welcome to New Comer’s Bay
 
Perhaps you stood on New Comer’s Bay
scratching your leg with your other foot
looking around for something
that isn’t quite really there
eyes glued to the precious screen
you carry around in your pocket
to look anything but confused, alone or even bored
and to look very busy on the screen
you have no business to attend
 
Perhaps you stood on New Comer’s Bay
when the little yellow boat fl-unked you off ...
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SomeFormOfWriting (United States) published:

Scars of Hippolyta #TitleGenerator

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    "Karen Hippolyta Summers. It is very nice to meet you all." The new girl announced her name and I peered over my book at the sound of her middle name: Hippolyta. My eyes quickly skimmed the open pages of the book open in my hands. Hippolyta. Hippolyta. Hippolyta. She was everywhere. But that was only fitting, as I was reading a book on Greek mythology. Hippolyta: daughter of Ares, Queen of the Amazons.
    I looked up just in...

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Shawnell67 (United States) published:

As I Write

PROMPT: Time Terminator  | GROUP: True Stories

As I write, I lose track of time as I meticulously type word after word. 
As I write, I advocate for myself and my peers who are disabled, or as I like to call it who are differently able.
As I write, I try to educate individuals to better understand disabilities and to see it in a positive light.
As I write, I choose to empower people and to lift them up as they read my writing. 
As I write, ...
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Lauren Nelson (United States) published:

Why I Write #1

PROMPT: Why I Write

I wish to speak my truth
but my voice shakes
and I stumble over every other word.

I consider the things that matter most
And everything I must express
But the words never make it past my lips.

In the dead of night
I walk through imaginary conversations
and plan speeches I know I'll never give.

But when I pick up a pencil
and mar a blank page with everything inside me
I can finally see myself there. 







 

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books and beaches (United States) published:

Floating

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Clinging on the the life jacket I had bought before I got on the boat, I tore off people trying to grab the strings. I watched others get swept away by the menacing waves, and other slip under the surface, doomed to stay at the bottom of the dark pit of water forever. I would help, but I couldn’t. I didn’t know how to swim. A mother with an infant bobbing up in down in the water cried out a...

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Misfit (United States) published:

Two days of butthead assumptions

PROMPT: Unconventional

We had to restart the application
                         tears 
                          fall
no recomm
endation?
WELL, YOU SHOULD'VE FINISHED THE SCHOLARSHIP APPLICATION AND SUBMIT IT
tears
fall
faster (Today's the day its due. I could still turn it, you vile woman. How stupid are you)

                                                        the principal said she won't writesob
She won't write what?




*sob*the*sob* recommendation*sob* ...

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Juuhazan (Philippines) published:

Fadeaway

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One day I will walk no more.


As movement ceases all meaning
And I stumble and fall
And lie in wait forever.

A hand raised out in vain
I screamed out loud for help
But I looked all around
And there was nothing there at all.

As desperation takes hold
The darkness broke and set in
Raised to the sky, for one last time
I cried aloud - and there was nothing more.
 

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Silver Pen (United States) published:

Not Me

PROMPT: Not Me  | GROUP: Flash Fiction

    I am old.  Wrinkled  Gray.  My life was wasted, spent in trying to be old when I was young and trying to be young when I was old, and succeeding at neither.  I never did what I wanted to do with my life because I was too busy trying to please people I didnt like who didn't care about me.  My marriage fell apart because I didn't spend the time I could have to hold it together.  My family all...

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Dmoral13 (United States) published:

I Write for the Unspoken

PROMPT: Why I Write

    Asking a writer why they write is like asking a philosopher about the meaning of life. You can't get one answer that is the same from every person, it's one of those questions that will haunt you for the rest of your life. One of those questions that you can spend your whole life searching for the answer, and end up finding yourself, by never really answering the question you had originally. No, you can't ask someone why they write...

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Dmoral13 (United States) published:

People are like Words

PROMPT: Unconventional

people Are like WORDs
WE choose who leads
and MAKE them better
like capital letters

and the others who
we claim ARE insignificant
don't get A LETTER
in the abbreviation

WE also CHOOSE when a sentence
of a persons' LIFE gets to end
that is punctuation
my friend

lastly WE leave little
obstacles like a comma
with WORSE oNes like dashes
in our world for others

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PureHeart (United Kingdom) published:

Lady Liberty

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She is a petite, small figure compared to others. And yet she outshines them all coninuously. 

Her face is strong, almost grave, as she has the weighty responsibility of welcoming everyone in. Aroused with curiosity, the people smile and cheer at the site of her. If only she could smile back. Her silent lips breath out the battle cry of truth, of righteousness. She holds her head up, steadfast, bracing for another day.

Her detailed garnments flowed down her body,...

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Dmoral13 (United States) published:

I Write for the Unspoken

PROMPT: Why I Write

    Asking a writer why they write is like asking a philosopher about the meaning of life. You can't get one answer that is the same from every person, it's one of those questions that will haunt you for the rest of your life. One of those questions that you can spend your whole life searching for the answer, and end up finding yourself, by never really answering the question you had originally. No, you can't ask someone why they write...

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michelle osepa (Curaçao) published:

Grades or knowledge

PROMPT: Personal Essay Competition: Making Change

I've studied in seven different schools throughout my life, three are in curaçao, three are in Colombia, and one is in Netherlands, every country has an educational system and every school has a way to adapt it, but I have to say that there is a problem of how the majority of schools adapt the educational system, and at the end the ones that suffer the most are us, the students. As I'm graduating this year, I can see that...

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Alicat (United States) published:

The Cabin

PROMPT: Your World in Three Senses

SIGHT 
  Tall cottonwood trees that are hundreds of years old hug the edge of the deep green lake, their vibrant leaves rustling slightly in the wind, the white cotton fluff drifting slowly down onto the still waters, speckling the lake white. The waves of the lake calmly lap onto the never ending amount of sand on the shore, turning what was subtly yellow dark with moisture. The old picnic bench is rooted nearby, its faded red wood protected...
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mrcolinredwards (United States) published:

Mother Knows Best,A Halloween Story For October Twenty First:

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Description: Hey all,today's October twenty first,the twenty first day of the Halloween season. Today's story is going to be a terrifying one and I only hope you won't get too frightened by it. This haunting tale from the crypt takes the phrase "mother knows best" and turns it into a frightening tale that will have you hanging onto the edge of your seat until the end! Enjoy it,but don't read this lightly,you might just learn something from this tale. 

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