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escapril day... 9, I think?? prompt: focus on the colour. this one is kinda inspired by Halsey's song "Colors". But I can't interpret her songs that well or relate to them so I just took a lot of literalness out of it and took out tragedy. I think I overdid this. It definitely isn't my best piece. Anyhoo, hmu with comments on what you think.
i love the idea of the piece. I might even try to write one like it except with my own twist.
This is literally so amazing and I really just love the concept. You wrote this with such beauty and I love it.
I love Halsey's songs. My favorite is probably colors though. You definitely brought her song into this.