Below, you'll see any text that was highlighted with comments from the reviewer.
When I first began looking at the poem, I got very interested in your idea of the apocalypse. I like the notion that everything returns to the earth after we're gone. There's a really nice aesthetic to the ruin of man made things mixed with nature reclaiming the world. I think the imagery did this aesthetic complete justice and captured an incredibly sad, but beautiful vision of the world's end.
As well as with your other poem that I reviewed, I couldn't really add anything to it. Of course, there are some punctuation things that could probably enhance it just by a bit, but other than a little cleaning up in that area, it's pretty much perfect.
Another awesome poem by you. I'm really loving your work. Btw sorry that this is so late.