Tushar Mandhan

India

Chasing dreams
Milestones to be achieved.
Hopeless romantic
Libra
'illegitimi non carborundum'
'I wanna fly,
I wanna run,
I wanna fall,
but I don't wanna stop.'
I'm baring my soul to listen whispers of gray skies

Message to Readers

Inspired by someone I loved or I think still do!

Not like a Cinderella story

April 6, 2020

FREE WRITING

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Going back in time, to make everything fine!
‘Twas a windy day, in the magical month of May.
Long drives to the island, to have a burger out!
I spent ‘those’ 30 days with you running around.
Leaning in, I’m on my way to stranger things.
Honey, I’m used to your mood swings!

Out and about, tryna figure out!
We’re Vibin n’ thrivin, you keep me inspiring!
Cause it’s not like a Cinderella story,
We’re rising up to the glory!!!

Gotcha shades on, I’ll love you from dusk to dawn!
We got caught in the moment, nothing to comment,
Roaming by seas of green, it's the story of a girl that dreams!
Sunsets in the paradise, your smile got me paralyzed!
Leaning in, I’m on my way to stranger things.
Honey, I’m used to your naughty winks!

Out and about, tryna figure out!
We’re Vibin n’ thrivin, you keep me inspiring!
Cause it’s not like a Cinderella story,
We’re rising up to the glory!!!           

You said that you’re a Thomasite ‘n’ socialite
Those are Tricky words; I think I better stay quiet!
Your dimples are deep, ‘n’ your voice so sweet,
I know that I deserve you but do you deserve me?
Leaning in, I’m on my way to stranger things.
Honey, I’m used to your pleasant zings!

Out and about, tryna figure out!
We’re Vibin n’ thrivin, you keep me inspiring!
Cause it’s not like a Cinderella story,
We’re rising up to the glory!!!       

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11 Comments
  • sunny.v

    this sounds like a song from the 90s :O i love this so so so much! makes me wanna stand up in a moving car and wave my hands


    22 days ago
  • WhispersOfGray

    I've never read anything like this! It's so upbeat and so... different. You certainly put a twist on Cinderella's story. It's gorgeous!


    about 1 month ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Replying: Thanks so much for your feedback! I'll take it into much consideration.


    2 months ago
  • jun lei

    writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/155987/version/304906 <3


    2 months ago
  • Loser

    You should write a musical! This is so good!


    2 months ago
  • Tushar Mandhan

    Thank you so much weirdo for your suggestion, I'll surely work in the regard.


    6 months ago
  • weirdo

    it does defeat sound like a song. nicely written. however, i suggest maybe dialing back on the exclamation marks. it does feel a bit excessive after a while


    6 months ago
  • The_People

    Great job on this, it's beautiful. :)


    6 months ago
  • hi i'm jackson ;)

    this IS really cute! aw! ahh! also thank you for saying happy friends day i really appreciate that!
    also you need to make it a song!


    7 months ago
  • rosemarywisdom

    This is so cute!


    7 months ago
  • Charisse Marison

    This sounds like a song! (a good song BTW!)
    Great job! Good luck with the person you loved :)


    7 months ago