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when you say "there it is" it makes me exited to read more about what you are talking about by saying "there" instead of saying like what it actually is.
when you say "my sister will kill me if she found out...." because these are the things that come in to mind when doing things for a real life problems.
when you walk into the time machine you said its used on specific days of the week maybe you could go into detail about what/why its used.
U GOT THIS!!!
lili smith <3