daisiesonfilm

Philippines

i have a bad tendency of romanticizing everything.

[ she/her ] [ 16 ] [ slytherin ]

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i hope you learn to fight for the happiness you deserve one day.

persephone the masochist.

October 21, 2020

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you’ve made a masochist out of me / ; /

the one gifted with sunflowers / 
and ran with jovial nymphs  /
in the blossoms and burrows /
all delicate silk and porcelain /
glowing in the sunlight / ; /

now chasing asphodel fields /
and yearning to tame those / 
with even the most unrest souls /
kissing all praise into /
those ebony feathered wings / . / 


you’ve made a masochist out of me / ; /

the treasured angel of the gods /
who dreamed of bejeweled tiaras /
and palaces of marble and gold /
slow dancing on the clouds /
and bathing in the waterfalls /

when you burned my lips with hellfire /
and baptized me in your embrace / 
forging a devil from the saintly / 
the sting so painfully sweet /
for it meant i was your queen / . / 


you made a masochist out of me / ; /

the heaven-meant goddess / 
bathed in luminosity /
now cloaked in darkness /

locking lips with ash and blood /
slow dancing with ghosts / 
wild with abandonment of the good /
sanity lost to the winds /
all in the name of romance /
for the unholiest of gods / . /
tell me why / even when / loving you felt like / burning caramel on my tongue / sickly sweet / and burning my throat  / 
i still couldn’t stop / finding myself / returning to you . /

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5 Comments
  • rainandsonder

    absolutely gorgeous!! such rich imagery in this piece, particularly loved the lines "now chasing asphodel fields" and "locking lips with ash and blood / slow dancing with ghosts". really beautiful piece, nice work!


    3 months ago
  • Busssy.Beee

    I have to echo the other comments. Stunning and gorgeous!! <3<3<3


    3 months ago
  • queenie

    this..this is stunning.
    what a different, yet enlightening take on persephone's myth.


    3 months ago
  • DarkRaven808

    I am in love with this poem! Kinda intense and a nice take on the Persephone myth.


    3 months ago
  • mirkat

    Wow... powerful and just wow. I honestly had to look up what "masochist" means. :D Anyway... I love the rhythm and your words. Keep writing!


    3 months ago