Livsnjutare (#words)

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14
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My real name's Alessia
INFJ (apparently)

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I have travelled more places than an explorer, never leaving my seat

Message to Readers

Books I have read and recommend:

-Keeper of the Lost Cities (Shannon Messenger)
Fantasy/Adventure

-Hunger Games (Suzanne Collins)
Dystopian Future

-Dragons in our Midst (Bryan Davis)
Adventure/Fiction

-The Cooper Kids (Frank E. Peretti)
Adventure/Christian Fiction/Mystery

-Passages: The Marus Manuscripts (Paul McCusker)
Adventure/Christian Fantasy

-The Bible (God of all creation)
Nonfiction

Different

February 15, 2021

FREE WRITING

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    As soon as my eyes were introduced to light, my mother new there was something wrong with me. I was different, but not a good different. Not the different every mother desires for her child. It wasn't something requiring medical attention, and for the record my appearance was similar to that of any other newborn you pass by. Chubby, small, and innocent. Very, very innocent. Even with all of that, when I was born and the nurse passed me to my mother, she looked down and she frowned 

The nurse, of course, was quite confused. I looked perfectly normal to her. Usually when the mother finally receives her long awaited child she smiles at the least. 
My mother knew something was different, wrong, abnormal. 
Hey there, here is the start of something I thought of and may continue writing later on!!
Please let me know what you think!!

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17 Comments

  • FastOceanLove

    Aw thanks!


    11 days ago

  • SamRose

    Re: Thank you!! :)


    11 days ago

  • BlueWolf (Semi Hiatus)

    This is so good!!!! I am so intrigued!!!! :)


    15 days ago

  • its.joyanna

    oouuu yes please please continue!
    re : thank you!!


    about 1 month ago

  • Coeur

    This is very suspenseful and intriguing! Does she have magic powers? Is the mother just unhappy? It's cool!


    3 months ago

  • wavewriter

    Re: I will! Thank you so much!


    3 months ago

  • Rohan’s Defender

    Re: aw, thank you so much! And I totally agree! It’s one of my favorite parts! <3


    3 months ago

  • ChimChim_1

    Re: Yes of course there are also parts 1 and 2 you can read hope you enjoy :3


    3 months ago

  • Deleted User

    Ooo, I love this idea!!! It gets me wondering, what's so different about her? AWESOME!!


    3 months ago

  • poetgoneonpluto

    i loved how this small prose creates a mystifying effect on my brain, the cliffhanger compels me to think about what will come next, uff!
    P.S. i think there's a typo in the first line, it should be "knew" i guess.
    Waiting to read more of it!!!


    4 months ago

  • poetgoneonpluto

    Re: thankyou :) also, yeah you should try!


    4 months ago

  • Jason_claire :)

    I loved it! The slight mystery too it is amazing
    Replying- That's okay, thanks for reading!


    4 months ago

  • Rachaelgrace (hiatus) :)

    I love this! The last sentence is a cliffhanger! Cannot wait to read more :)


    4 months ago

  • AJ - Izzy

    I'm so captivated right now... the ending is so full of character, I love it! On another note, Keeper of the Lost Cities is so good :)


    4 months ago

  • Moonsinger

    Such a great hook! :D I would love to see this continue!


    4 months ago

  • wavewriter

    Wow, this is great! Please continue, I want to know what happens next!

    Replying: Thank you! I'm sure your cursive is awesome. :)


    4 months ago

  • Jj101

    This is so good!! I want to know what's different now!


    4 months ago