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I would love to hear if this review makes you want to read the book and what do arts don’t make sense. Thank you so much! :)
The plot, I believe, was very well explained. It gives the review an air of intrigue that drew me in when I first saw this piece published. As well, I have a very clear idea of what the book is about and what I am expecting, especially with that fantastic first sentence.
Yes, for sure. This is a really great start I believe, and it has some very good descriptive explanations on the plot of the book; as this is a book review, I would love to know more about your own opinion on the book! Even polishing the plot to make it more brief, and allow room for more reviewing would further your review. The last line is a good start, but try digging even further into that. Why do you like this book and rate it 5/5? What sort of ideas, themes, or characters really stood out to you? If you would recommend this book to any sort of audience out there, who would love this book?
During the explanation of the plot, it would definitely strengthen the review if you added a few quotes or some of the author's own words (with proper citations, of course). Perhaps add a few of your favourite lines, a key idea or phrase that has deeper meaning to it and helps promote the book even further, something along those lines. If you could shorten the plot even more, perhaps to include just the key events and things that personally, for you, drew you in the first time you read this book, would strengthen it as well.
Keep going, this is a great start! I personally love the book Cinder and I believe it is a great book to review, especially because it has so many great aspects to it in all sorts of different ways.
Best of luck in the competition, and feel free to reach out to me if you have any questions! Happy writing.