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it just seems like is such an interesting book, and the way you wrote it out and ended it on some questions really makes me want to read it!
I would love to hear more about how the step siblings met Cinder, as well as their initial reactions. But overall, really nice. If anything one thing I would say is a little bit less information especially in the second paragraph it was getting a little confusing with all the names that I had to remember to continue the reading of your book review. Maybe an idea is that you introduce them one by one later in your review or something?
I added comments to everything I would change in your piece, also I love your ending, but maybe after you say how much you like the book, add a finishing question such as one of them in the paragraph above to leave your readers thinking. If that makes sense haha. Potentially you could just switch your last two paragraphs.
Your book choice is great and I love your writing style! keep it up:)