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I highly recommend reading this book; it's amazing! Peer reviews would be very much appreciated :D
I am so drawn to this book after reading your review! You portray A Tangle of Knots as a beautiful, whimsical story with a unique setting and characters that come alive. The imagery and descriptive writing in this review are mesmerizing!
I added some comments throughout the piece about some things I though you could add/take out. These of course are just suggestions! It's your piece, and you know where you want to go with it.
I found a few punctuation errors (highlighted) and I think fixing those up will make the review even stronger!
This is a beautiful review. It reminded me of the magic that comes with reading a good book. This is a great draft and I know it will turn out to be a wonderful piece.
I loved reading this review! I have a feeling it's going to stay in my mind until I get a chance to read to book. I can't wait to see how your final draft turns out. Good luck in the competition!