Rose A

United States

Hi! I'm Rose
aka:
rosy cheeks
Flowers of Fall

She/her
14
Hamilton Fan
anime watcher
music lover
obsessed with books
theatre kid
kind of decent writer(?)
indecisive person
a little weird ngl

est... um... September 2020??

Message to Readers

have a good day/night/week!

January grab bag prompt

January 15, 2021

FREE WRITING

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~~~Write a poem inspired by the color of the walls in your room~~~



deep blue water that bites
the only thing that touches the
cool glistening ice

the ice smiles with white teeth
seeming friendly yet almost deadly
which is why you stay away
for you hate what you may not have

(you look... not touch
you take... not give)

the sea feels infinite
the only pause in its neverending journey
the deserts and valleys of which we preside

before it starts again
changing names and hues
as it says hello to each coast

once again the water greets the ice
they embrace like lovers
the ice does not notice the mass the ocean is stealing from it

the ocean then brings it back to you
as a gift to compliment your coasts
and to taunt at the mistakes you have made
Okay. Basically, my walls are mainly white, but there is also a lot of blue too. Not ocean blue, but still blue.

I don't know if this piece made sense or not(didn't think too much for it), but I hope it's enjoyable. I'll come back to it eventually. Oh yeah, when the poem says "you", I'm not talking to anyone specifically. I hope you know that this is not meant to be offensive. It is kind of about melting ice caps and climate change, but not entirely.

update: Hello, hello! Ok, I'm trying to enter this art school so I would REALLY appreciate it if you could name some pieces of mine that you like. THis is a super important decision, so I would love other opinions on it. Thank you, peaches!

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8 Comments
  • Stone of Jade

    this is gorgeous!! those last lines tho...wow. stunning! I love the imagery.

    anyways...Chapter 26 for Traitors and Rebels is out!
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/213137/version/441746


    about 2 months ago
  • Rachaelgrace (hiatus) :)

    this is amazingly done. I love the imagery!! :)


    about 2 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Re: Thanks!


    about 2 months ago
  • bunnybeige

    re: i am, too. ;)


    about 2 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender

    Wow.... Thai is honestly one of my favorite pieces you’ve written! It’s so descriptive and gorgeous! I really really love it!


    about 2 months ago
  • Love, Rose

    that is stunning also nice name


    about 2 months ago
  • madeline3.14159

    Re: Aw thank you so much!!
    This is gorgeous!! I love it :)


    about 2 months ago
  • FantasyOtter12

    Oh wow! I actually really like this one - I'll keep looking through some of your other pieces but for now this one is a fave :)


    about 2 months ago