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Message to Readers
Does this poem make any sense to you? I'd love to hear your perception of it and what you think it's about.
This really resonated with me. I like how simple it is but also how deep it sits.
Honestly I think you articulated it perfectly.
I like the layout but honestly on my first and second reads I totally missed the final line, maybe just moving it up a gap or two would make it more visible. I know you said you were nervous to post this, but I'm glad you did. It made me feel heard.