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Decade

By: sristi agarwal


A decade since you have gone
But I still hear your voice,
as if it was yesterday.
Ten summers have passed
So have ten winters,
But I doubt,if I will 
survive for ten more seasons,
I won't quit for just another day
Though I am void of reasons.


 


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Peer Review

I love how simple it is. It tells the whole story in just a few lines.


I want to know who this person is. A parent? A friend? A romantic interest?


Reviewer Comments

This is really good! I like it a lot!