Peer Review by J3llySk3lly (United States)

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Kentucky Pride

By: watermelons_words


FREE WRITING

Singing Ho Hey out the window at the top of your lungs,
Beautifully out of tune
Starbucks latte in hand

You reach out the open window
Towards fields of corn and 
High, grassy mountains

Winding roads
Pink flowers
Scraggly trees

Kids on a tire swing
Dogs racing around the backyard
Parents laughing at a joke

Your hair blows back in the wind
You smile
And drive on


Peer Review

I like the simple descriptions! I've never been to Kentucky but it was written clearly enough that it was relatable.


Maybe some more specific cultural details would be nice? Paint a picture of your home, not just a home.


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