Tree cropped

Hanan Adi

Germany

Impressionist.

A word is worth a thousand pictures.

Message from Writer

Your voice matters.
Cherish it.
Hone it.
Use it.

Tree cropped

Hanan Adi (Germany) liked Baking Chaos by hmkeselman (United States)

6 days ago

Tree cropped

Hanan Adi (Germany) reviewed:

“My thoughts are stars I cannot fathom into constellations.” ― John Green

FREE WRITING

There are some tense shifts throughout the poem which are just a little distracting. Some parts are in present tense ("living in a world full of evil ... is yet so cruel"), while others are in past/conditional ("every day I...

6 days ago

Tree cropped

Hanan Adi (Germany) reviewed:

Stuck

FREE WRITING

This has got to be one of the best things I've read on WtW. I love rhyming poems. Well done.

24 days ago

Tree cropped

Hanan Adi (Germany) reviewed:

a wish of mine, i suppose

FREE WRITING

"watcha think of the writing that comes out of hungry, sleep-deprived me? should i tap into her more?" Sometimes I wake up extra early in the morning (read: sleep-deprived!), just to write. It actually helps me to concentrate: when wide-awake,...

24 days ago

Tree cropped

Hanan Adi (Germany) reviewed:

Moon

FREE WRITING

Really nice work! Keep writing!

24 days ago

Tree cropped

Hanan Adi (Germany) liked This World by m.n.b (United States)

25 days ago

Tree cropped

Hanan Adi (Germany) liked Trust by Sydni Whitfield

25 days ago

Tree cropped

Hanan Adi (Germany) liked a fear of 0 by Christy Wisdom (United States)

26 days ago

Tree cropped

Hanan Adi (Germany) liked Stuck by nmallaghan (United Kingdom)

26 days ago

Tree cropped

Hanan Adi (Germany) reviewed:

Tiny Little Excerpt from SP Vol. 2.

FREE WRITING

I do not know where this excerpt occurs in the larger work, but I think it would make a great first/last sentence of the story/chapter. It has that power that would either grab the reader into the story or let...

about 1 month ago